Social Media had both positive and negative impact because you can know more peoples that you never see them or you never meet that person and sometimes it’s not good because other people can get your information easily from you and can put it into social media. The positive is that it’s help you to communicate with others like your family members and your friends. The negative is other people can get your information about you from your social media and can make fun of you or can use it to their social media to do other things with you. My experience about blogger is people can know stuff about me and other things which is about me. In conclusion, social media is good and bad how people use it and make things about us which is not good for me.
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ReplyDeleteYou give the information about the effect of the social media, you give your opinion and evidence to support her idea. I like the way that she talk about her experiment about her blogger. However she need to improve her blogpost by write it like an essay, I didn’t see your intro, the body paragraph, she have her conclusion, but you don’t write it in the right way. In addition you missing one resource.
ReplyDeleteYou did well, I like the way you explain about social media. But It makes me little confused, so I think you should have a clear organization of paragraphs like an essay. I also agreed with your experience.
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